Feed Back on my Pitch

I presented my Pitch the the other members if my group and this is the feed back i was given:

What went well in my treatment:

• Lots of detail about costumes and narrative of the story line.
• All relevant and linked to research. 

What was bad about the treatment:  

• Didn't talk enough about all the characters , only went into detail about the main character. 

What was good about the script: 

• Included aspects from other sitcoms, could tell it was a sitcom.

What was bad about the script:

• Mention all the characters more instead of just the main characters.

What was good about the mood board:

• All related to sitcoms

What was bad about the mood board:

• More colour
• More about the costumes of the characters.

Summary:

Therefore i need to talk more about all my characters and not just the main character of the sitcom, and also the costumes in which my other characters will wear.